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Seductress

Fancy frilly lace chiffon has been fashioned
into sensual bedclothes for the beautiful
today's woman.
A nightgown of crow's feathers black adornes a
soft feminine form.
The sensual outfit hugs firmly to the woman's
very sexy body.
Its color matches the color of her shiny, silky
long hair.
Alluring in her outfit of the night,
Men in the neighborhood are transfixed by the
seductress's profound beauty.
They stop and stare,
And lustily glare,
Peering at her through her bedroom window,
Watching as she climbs into bed,
As the lonely woman lies silently in wait for
her lover's late return.
Then,
When he does,
And the two lovers interwine,
Under the covers passion will ignite,
And desire burn ever so hot like the Sun,
Passion will burn as the world turns,
For this lady in bedroom black.
Another night of desires of the flesh is fulfilled
For the seductress 

A contest entry

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  • alexandrathegreat
    November 1, 2007

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    This is whew... A hot one. Sent me into a cold shower that's for sure. I found it rather intriguing that you turned black into something so sexy and alluring you did a good job with this. Nice to see you again.


    • Adb5121967
      November 9, 2007
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      About My Contest Entry

      Would you really like to know how I turned black----which is usually associated with darkness and evil----into something so sexy and alluring? The answer is very simple. My girlfriend inspired this poem. She sent me a total of 28 photographs of herself. In 5 of those photographs she is wearing a black pair of thong panties and a black shirt. These are the clothes she sleeps in at night. And the woman has got a beautiful body. Skinned tanned so brown. She's a very extremely attractive woman. And she was the inpsiration for my sexy black poem. Anyway, just thought that you would enjoy hearing this little piece of information. Bye.


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