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Like Holy Water



She tears at light,
rivets of darkness-
Mocking beauty.

Break for me,
complacent vulnerability-
in sharp shattered pieces
you complete me.



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  • PerfectTonight
    November 3, 2007
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    beautiful piece, short and sweet.
    Great job.