Never Again will i open my heart not after all of those years of pain that you put me through each day.
Never again will i trust you again because you broke that trust by breaking my heart.
You will never get my trust back never again because you put me through so much pain deep down that it hurts to much to think of you.
Never again will i think of you because you bring to much tears to my eyes.
Never again, Never again will i open my heart to you.
Author notes
The song Never Again by Kelly Clarkson helped me write this song.
A contest entry
- Your Favorite Poems by Avatar of Innocence.
400 points, ended December 27, 2007, 23 entries
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No. Too simple. Too bland. Too plain. Do you really want a critical review? A real, intense critique of this poem is what you want? Are you sure? Did you read the rules? Are you an adult? If yes is the answer to all these questions, leave this poem in my contest. If not remove this poem immediately.
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A very pained piece of expression you have penned within these lines. Potent, relating to the song well.
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Awww so touching and very heartfelt, how many people can relate to this so much, the pain deep within, it hurts so much deyond words...
Amazing as always again here...
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