Life is...
a buffet table
spread and overlaid
drenched in spiced variety
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at your service!
A contest entry
- Life is..... by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended October 30, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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A wonderful meal here my friend..Like it!
All the best!
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Thank you, life can be...whatever we attempt-at least I'd like to think it is this way
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Our thoughts seem to match a lot...
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LMAO like the meaning behind this and the way you just laid it out there.
great job on this one.
best wishes
tory -
I see you are very good at using just a few words. I love how you done this. Great job.
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lol, hahaha I'm a straight-shooter, I suppose. hahaha hope that's not a bad thing
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Why thank you, I really hadn't particularly noticed, glad you did thoughlol
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Nice cleaver take on the prompt, good imagery and nice writting!
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Thanks, I tried hahaha which is all one can d
lol
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Wow. Great take on the prompt. I loved this piece, and the last line made me giggle. Life is definitely a buffet table, friend, but sometimes good company makes even the worst meal look appetizing. I take it that you're good company, so...care to eat something with me?
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Thank You
Anytime at all, friend hahaha good food, good company, what can one ask for more?
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Such a clever and expressive way of putting it. Thanks so very much for sharing... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.
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