You're leaking
your feelings are all over the page
this is a sad time
you're in a disjointed stage
time is winding
get a better handle on that rage
talk it out
find a willing and competent sage.
At this rate
you can't be your authentic self
that's why you'll notice
you're in a box alone, upon a shelf
you've been a turn-off
and now there's nobody around you left!
Author notes
Prompt - Emotional Leprosy
A contest entry
- Emotional Leprosy by Acidanthra.
475 points, ended November 3, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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ah emotions - they can drive us wild in the aisles at times while the rain from eyes flows like a stream, a good poem
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Very good and creative take on the prompt. Should do well in this contest.
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You are so encouraging, thank youlol I appreciate
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