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A Memo to me--THINGS I LIKE ABOUT JANE

Her tender caring eyes--
Expressive and often smiling.

Her warmth of person--
Loving and so needing to be loved.

Her soft and caring touch--
Imparting such a delicateness.

Her quick  and keen wit--
Showing obvious intelligence and much appreciated humor.

Her beautiful smile--
Lighting up her face with a glow.

Her sweet unassuming ways--
Shyly requesting what she desires.

Her kindly soothing voice when she speaks--
Her soft melodic voice when she sings quietly to herself.

Her caring hugs and kisses--
Which displays her heart of passion.

Her true spirit of optimism--
Which catapults her over many difficulties faced.

Her innate trust in God--
And her ability to see His Hand in many things.

Her love of family--
And her genuine concern and regard for them all.

Her ability to interact with others--
Often with total strangers, as if new found friends.

Her ability to be strong when needed--
Yet not domineering, but gladly aiding, as she can.

The beautiful spirit of praise, oneness and cooperation--
As we joyfully sing hymns of praise and love together.

Her awareness of perceived weaknesses--
Coupled with her determination to cope and/or overcome.

Her willingness to search out and change if needed--
Driven by her willingness to please and also to be right.

Her ability to totally submit and love without reservation--
To give and show in such beauty, the depth of her soul.

And finally,

The way she loves me so much and exclusively--
Making me the most cherished, blessed and happiest man on the face of the earth!

Author notes

While the word LOVE is not predominate in this piece, it is permeated, through and through. I am so blessed to have Jane in my life and as my wife. I gladly share with you, about the love of my life, and why she is so wonderfully so!

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  • Roseycheeks15
    November 23, 2007
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    aww this is a beautiful Poem! good luck in contest!


  • PureRomance
    November 20, 2007

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    This is a very beautiful poem. You did a marvelous job with this. If it is not too much to ask please add me to your favs so that I may have the blessing of reading more from you as the contest progresses. God bless you in all that you do and write, and good luck to you and your poem in this contest.


  • He Is My Lighthouse
    November 17, 2007
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    WOW, this is totally awesome and beautiful.


  • Anna Emkah
    October 30, 2007

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    This is true LOVE.

    It's so beautiful to read how much you love your wife and how much she means to you. And what a beautiful picture you have put above this poem. I wish you two a very long and happy life together. for you both.
    Anna.


  • fairytalelovestory
    October 29, 2007
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    awwwwwwwwww

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