Shower Time
Water beats against my breasts so round
I bite my lip, and don’t make a sound
Rivulets trickle down my belly
The sensation is heavenly
Lathered hands caress my ample hips
Move down south, linger upon swollen lips
Slide a finger through my wet slit
Teasingly brush against my clit
I gasp for air, I need a hard fuck
Reaching down I grab my rubber duck
I press his back it begins to vibrate
Place it there, my hips start to gyrate
My need is strong I want to cum
I press his beak against my bum
A finger inside massages my g-spot
Knees buckle I fall into a squat
Lean back against the wall, I rub my clit with vigor
It wont be long now, with this my climatic trigger
Inhibitions tossed aside
Three fingers thrust inside
Pinch my clit with all my might
My cunt contracts so tight
As I cum I squeal and scream
Extract my fingers, lick my girley cream
A contest entry
- Erotica? Why Not by Stolen memories.
400 points, ended May 7, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This deserves a STANDING OVATION, to say the least!
Damn, I'd like to like that 'girly cream' and I certainly enjoyed watching you - before heading off to Dreamland! Hopefully, I will see you in my dreams - and I'll be licking off some of me 'manly cream' from my fingers, too! I'm SO GLAD that I stopped by to see what you have been up to, recently - and sad that U am all out of applause for the day.
Love & Peace!
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clean time
Hello there.
This poem is dirty in a clean place, or maybe it's clean in a dirty place. Anyway, i think i need to get into that shower now and turn the tap on cold.
Graphic and direct.
Have a creative day,
BJ.
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love it, dear. Simply wonderful. <3
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thank you my darling, sexy, far away girlfriend
iv missed you stax.
hope you had a great xmas, and an even better new year.
love you stax and stax
ang
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Hot, hot and hot again. My Sister, you have done it again with another brilliant erotic piece that had my screen MELTING. Hahaha. Wonderful imagery, as always. I love the way you built the sexual tension up and up, until the climax. Yes, my Sister is definitely the Queen of Erotic Writing.
Love always
Your Brother
Wayne
xxx
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wraps my arms around your neck and hugs you tight. thank you for your comment my dearest brother.
ang
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My lord girl!!!
Whoever you are.....now Im wet!!!
Think I'll jump in the shower myself after this
That was HOT!!!
Oh my how I invision myself there with you
write another...and another
until I cum
hahaha
great job...your imagery was most excellent
Terrific!!!
Keep them comin
And yourself as well...Pisces girl!
Much Love!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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now im blushing bright red! thank you for your wonderful comment. If you enjoyed this please feel free to browse through my other work, as most of it is erotica.
ang
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Great job!
I loved the imagery you have with this one. Thanks for taking part in the group challenge.
**Master Ktulu**
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*curtsies* thank You for Your comment Master Ktulu. i do try aim to please *bats eyes and smiles sweetly*
ang
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great visual imagery ! totally enjoyed reading it to my man ! cheers x
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thank you for stopping by and reading my work, i appreciate it.
ang
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