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Five

Starred gaze,
locked lips,
fevered lust,
love...?

Was how it was.
How it is.
When you decide.

Away from prying eyes,
you are mine, and I am yours,
entwined as one,
heart and soul

But you are not mine, and I am not yours,
our lives too seperate,
too far,
to try...?

I give you my all, my very being,
long for you to hold me,
your arms a barrier from all the hurt,
the hurt you bring to me

You dry my tears with a gentle word,
whispered just for me,
a tender kiss, as light as air,
is all it takes for a smile,
to reach my eyes

And when your gone, I'm alone,
surrounded with friends, and alone,
waiting,
until the next time,
hoping,
it will be the first time,
the first time,
you stay,
with me,
forever.





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  • danceswsquirrels
    November 21, 2007
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    awww.. I hate feeling like I'm not good enough to be with some one the whole time we're together.. this reminds me of some past relationships that have put me into that frame of mind... I love how your endind almost brings it full circle with your begining! The beat quick and shooting out to a close...


    Jessa


  • danceswsquirrels
    October 29, 2007
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