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take me

I look into your eyes,
I see the hunger lie within,
a hunger for my heart and soul,
A hunger for a sin.
You kiss my lips
hard then soft,
your hands move slowly down,
as i take your shirt off.

My fingers explore forbidden fruits,
as they move lower down,
feeling the lust you have for me,
and hearing your lustful sounds.
You remove the barrier between us,
in the form of evil clothes,
lay me down on the bed,
the lust we feel is shown.

You're fingers trace
a line upon my breast,
sending shivers through my body,
as i touch upon your chest.
You kiss my neck,
suck and bite,
trace a heart with your tongue,
your naked form such a sight,


Your lips move lower,
until they reach
the part of me that screams,
drowning out all your speech.
Your tongue, it flickers
across my heart
as you plunge it into me,
we will never be apart.

you whisper things in my ear,
you love me more than life,
I feel your being inside of me,
as you truly make me your wife.
You thrust in and out,
getting deeper every time,
until all i feel,
is ecstasy that blinds.

A feeling like no other,
an explosion of our love,
we lie together afterwards,
as angels applaud us from above.
I never felt such pleasure,
I never felt such love,
but as i lie here with you now,
I know that i am loved

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  • Swtpoetryman
    January 4

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    THANKS FOR YOUR SWEET & SENSUAL SUBMISSION!

    I ENJOYED this erotic, heartfelt, and soulful piece - to say the least! I'm off to judge this contest now - which will be a HARD JOB - but it may as will be a naughty man like me doing it! GOOD LICK!
    Peace & Love!
    Earl.


  • Swan song gold member
    November 3, 2007
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    Wow! this was very very naughty well done poet