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Nothing Gold Can Stay

Nothing gold can stay...
our jaded heart in the way
innocence lost
emotions the cost.

Nothing gold can stay...
need someone to find the way.
Be my guiding light
hold me close and tight.

Nothing gold can stay...
be with me everyday.
Heal my cold numb heart
So I can make a new start.

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  • ervisgreen2198
    November 3
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    Great

    Just as good a work as usual mom. Sorry I have been on to read them lately but im working on catching up.


  • X-xElectrax-X
    May 16, 2008
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    this is a really nice write


    • Tali28
      May 22, 2008
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      Thanks

      thank you for your read and your comment...
      take care,
      Tali


  • Shakes-spear
    January 17, 2008

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    sad

    but a story way too common. today we seem to have so many who play with peoples emotions. Broken hearts are a common thing and that is too bad! I'm here for you darling (I know it's 60/40) Love and kisses, The Shaker

    • Tali28
      January 17, 2008
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      Thanks

      Thank you for your read and your support in my poetry. I know you are here for me hun and I really appericate.
      Much love,
      Tali


  • Death From Above
    October 29, 2007
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    Very nice write indeed keep up the good work!


    • Tali28
      October 29, 2007
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      Thanks

      Glad you liked it. Thanks for youe comment and your applauds much appericated.
      Much love,
      Tali


  • Salt Walker
    October 29, 2007
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    whew. you had me thinking you were plagerizing. but nope. good job sis!


    • Tali28
      October 29, 2007
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      Thanks

      No I wouldn't do that Glad you liked it.
      Love ya,
      Tali Sis

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