To me beauty is...
burnt amber glow,
sunsets magical prism.
Followed by...
diamonds dancing upon
velvet ebony sky's
second only to...
the opal crescent
that smiles down
on your dreams.
Author notes
30 words.
A contest entry
- Make me want MORE by Suzanne Dia.
1000 points, ended October 30, 2007, 27 entries
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400 points, ended December 4, 2007, 37 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Short poem, but what a huge amount of beautiful images and the metaphors that rise up with them
great job!
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Stunning!!!!
what a beautiful picture
you placed in my mind
"the opal crescent
that smiles down
on your dreams."
from dusk til dawn
and all the magic in between
Love this!!!
~Pastel
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Nature is beauty and beauty is nature.
Nice write
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Awesome!! The beauty your words describe is mesmerizing.
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