Innocence and Joy
Peace and Love
Touch my hand and let me be
a part of the heavens above
Laugh and Smile
Giggle and Coo
I know now and always
I can't stop loving you
Be here my baby,
Because you are my gift
The soul who can change me
My ever lasting bliss
Never change your beauty
Never leave your happiness
because I know some day
I will need to borrow it
Be my hero
Be my strength
Because now and forever
we will keep each other safe
Play and Grasp
Move and Run
In your life I promise you
That we will have fun
A contest entry
- IMAGERY CONTEST!--- Baby Hands!-prewrites now allowed by Lost-Rose-Petal.
500 points, ended October 31, 2007, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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aww I love it! so sweet
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very pretty. the last line irks me for some reason. a little too childish compared with the mature flow of the rest of the poem. good job though.

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yea i know. I wasn't sure how I should finish it =/ oh well.
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