He's the light of this world
in dignity he sighs
as his love so shines.
Complete control over the beast
dwelling within the
soul of man; he ponders
our piety of blue tears.
Should he rip body from soul?
Protecting his world
filled with mans lies.
No! false hopes belong to
wicked hearts, weaken alibi's.
Little gaurdian created
by GOD, close not your heart
to this world.
As we rest in the palm
of your hand.
A faithful few
fighting for sorrowful
weaken man.
I see that you
are so tired.
We still have
faith in
YOU!
Author notes
prompt: picture
I see the child as GOD's son....
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt by Freestyle Bushido.
450 points, ended October 31, 2007, 9 entries
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you have great perception novy, you probably are right xx pppg best of luck beautiful write
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very nice poem, I love the messiah metaphorical tone you chose in this puece, usally I think spiritual poems all sounds the same, but this is very unique and I like, thank you for entering.
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