In this empty black tomb
I feel the darkest hours pass
I am alone, and the pain is reborn
You will be with me forever
Deep in my thoughts
You will never die
You will stay with me
Though I often wonder why
'Am i still dreaming
Or am i at peace?'
I will meet you in the end times
Wherever i feel you calling
I will follow
I would fight for you
You are my forever
In my heart, you will not die
You are eternity
Though i often question why
Please tell me if i am dreaming
Please tell me i am with you
Please erase the cancer of emotion
Heartbroken I go under.
Please tell me what you think
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I saw a number of cliches here, and I think the capitalization of the "I"s would have produced greater reader impact. On the other hand, I really liked how you started this poem--it inspired me all of a sudden to write a piece. Powerful words.
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