It's the dance you do;
Every time you roll those hips.
The drop in between my knees,
I'm ready to throw my head back and laugh in ectasy.
Fingers lingering across the naked skin;
I've always loved drowning in your sweet sin.
Grip the leather around my neck,
Forever and again this act of ours will leave you a wreck.
The hot fever of euphoria pulsing throughout my head;
Let's take this little charade from the kitchen to the bed.
Dim the lights and blindfold my delicate eyes,
Tonight let's make this a memory that will always last.
The silken cuffs against my wrists;
You watch from above and laugh at the violent twists.
A stiletto heel turns the tables across flesh,
And now he's at the mercy of your delicious wish.
It's the dance of sin that keeps the blood going;
The drop of my head and the screams of ectasy still flowing.
And the mount of pleasure shooting through me,
Every time you slide your fingers across hushed pleads.
Entwined at the waist;
The thrustings go unseen.
I know that in your eyes you'll always be the death of me,
Please oh please just listen to one of my screams!
In the act of it all;
You manage to tighten the cuffs.
Somehow you knew deep down he loves it rough.
And now he's at the mercy of your delicious wish.
Close your eyes and say your prayers;
Tonight girl is the night we let the Heavens hear.
Harder now the pulse flows,
And I'm caught in the storm of hail.
Slight euphoria runs cold as we slow down;
In you come sticky with the sweetness you found.
It's the dance you do,
That makes me addicted to love you.
Author notes
Haaa xD I was just browsing the New Contests and ended up running into yours! x]
A contest entry
- Make Me Squirm (15+) by Zerstort.
390 points, ended November 10, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments?
Comments
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Nothing like a little bondage and dominatrix style poetry to get the blood pumping.
Now for the technical: The flow is good, but at times there is rhyme (not that it's bad, but it just doesn't seem appropriate when it's not throughout) A great poet on here once told me, "Either use rhyme or don't. Anything in between sounds forced." Other than that, kudos. Good luck in the contest.
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This is passion-filled...I like it.
Good luck to you
Aden Recreated -
what??
Well now that seems fun -
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What does? :B
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