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life is...

life is what you have between a tear and a laugh, added with some numbers.

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  • penman gold member
    October 30, 2007
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    Excellent

    Wonderful choice of words. Describes life very well.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    October 30, 2007

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    Oh yes, very very clever indeed! Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.


  • Beauty Of Silence
    October 29, 2007

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    OH GOSH! charu! this left me breathless! This is a wonderful one liner! i loved the whole thang man!

    And the reality in this line was so cool! charu! this was an amazing piece of work! YOU BETTER WIN SMTHING! best of luck!


  • transit
    October 29, 2007

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    woaw!

    this is sure thought-provoking yet a bit weird. lol!

    I liked it except the numbers part. math... but I think I get it though. there is so much involvement with numbers everyday it's scarey. rather have english. best of wishes in the contest!


    • checkmate
      October 30, 2007
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      it refers to getting older lol

      • transit
        November 1, 2007
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        I knew that! NOT! aaww brilliant job and congratulations on entering the top 5. though you didn't win, it still is among the best.

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