Does she ever miss what we had?
If not our love… our friendship?
Or maybe that concept is just mad
Ever question her actions?…
Rapidly replay mine in her head?
I’d bet she hated my justified reactions
They all know this happened for a reason.
Even if she was oblivious to this pain,
and her mind boggling treasons.
She needs to know her worth
baby this is all I have left to say,
Beneath the dirt to forever stay.
Author notes
True words to an untrue woman. planed to be married for two an a half years. It's not the quickness of the break up that is shocking but the recovery time for both parties. I moved in with my new boyfriend I had just meet and she ran off with a girl in a different state.
(I still love her)
WHATchaTHINK???
Comments
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THis is a really personal poem then, eh?
well.. i can't really understand your author notes... is it that yous both split up, then you started dating a guy and she met another girl somewhere else?!
I love the meaning behind your poem, I know exactly how you felt at that particular moment you wrote it, which makes the poem work so well (its easy to relate to)
The wondering i wonder if their thinking about me, do you still like her or was this just a pondering moment you had?.. because if you still love her you should tell her
but think it out thoroughlly cos somethings that we like aren't good for us.. just like fatty foods
but nice write and thanks for sharing,
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