I walk among
flowers
we smile
for the sun
stars wink-
the cold
ground calls
A contest entry
- Life is..... by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended October 30, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - PIF contest- 17, 15, 13 words by grassisgreener.
650 points, ended December 10, 2007, 16 entries
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simple until you peel away the layers. intriguing in a few words, great job.
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wel MAl, i must say this one defiantely rang within my ears. Loved it as usual you kick *ss!!
great job
Tory -
Life in full cycle written so serenely and profoundly. Thanks so very much for sharing... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.
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profound beauty in your words and in your loving heart. the imagery is masterful and i'm not just saying it cuz I sooooo love the stars at night as I do, but it warms the spirit within the soul just as the sun brings about the photosynthesis of plants and flowers growth. well done my dear friend many blessings always xxxx
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A weave comes full circle of natural influance effects in this piece so very well.Shows the light of your soul unabashed.And honest dear author! Loved it!
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oh and we must beam as broadly as we can as long as we can...beautifully penned comparison
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This piece is very beautiful, Mal. Wonderfully penned! Good luck in the contest! Excellent!!
~Candy
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Bravo!!!! I really think you're gonna win something with this beauty! Wow. I mean, the flowers are sort of a symbol for the beauty and brilliance of life, as well as the sun, and then the stars and the ground are like the end of life. Wow. I SO love this piece!!!! Bravo!!!! I wish you all the best!
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