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Life Beyond


Growing from a foetus,
Into a human,
Decaying into dust,
Meeting your creator once more.




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  • PassionsPromise gold member
    October 30, 2007

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    oh the cycle of life.

    brought in live, then die returning to the Father
    Great job here.
    best wishes to you

    Tory


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    October 30, 2007

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    you've certainly said it all here in a straight and simple manner. Thanks so very much for sharing... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.


  • Lady Eventide
    October 29, 2007

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    Wow. I so agree. That's life: first you grow, and then you fade away into the wind like particles of dust. Loved the last line of this piece the most. Good job.