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Tickles..

When the dawn comes
and Wind blows..
Sin in poetry blossoms
Saying naked verses of
shudders.

Rustling
like lukewarm breeze, 
Plunge desires,
Sings moon 
of excitements,
Supplicant touches.

Madness
feels long hairs 
to tickle; 
Whispers.. 
dream different.

Inside 
Wind
locked;
moved;
moans;
enjoys.

(pregnant, immense, grateful, full)

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  • Namita
    November 12, 2007
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    Oooo. Lovely. I would have loved it if it was left- aligned. But still beautifully penned.