I have left no inspiration
I need some information
Because I want my location
Of this sad world I've been placed on
All I have are lies
I don't want any personal ties to
Beaurocratic bullshit and insubordination
In this sad life
I'm destined to
If we fight another day
We just end up dying another day
We all end up dying there anyway
We all end up crying there anyway
Because of these tortures we all must pay
To redeem ourselves unjustly
To sharpening axes, To breaking bones
To ending lives, To throwing stones
To flee this paradoxal world of hunger
To stop this universe's endless slumber
And end the madness that has destroyed us
And it ends with just a kiss
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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An amazing piece of poetry. it is very original and i feel this gives your reader a little view into your life. overal a powerful piece
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I very much enjoyed this poem. I don't get to read many intellectual writings so I have to say well done, I like the originality in your words
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really good
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Well to say the least, its a rather intellectually stimulating poem. However, its important to not that I think your second stanza doesn't fit quite to well with the rest of the poem, it lacks the essence and the forceful emotions present in the other stanzas.
Despite this fact, I would like to wish you a job well done
Bravo
Arty
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