birth and re-birth,
stepping forward,
over or around
all the while
inhaling knowledge,
exhaling hope
Please tell me what you think
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as life poems go you just about said it all
the these few lines.
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You're so right...
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thank you
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Such an insightful little piece of poetic art. Thanks so very much for sharing... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.
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It is really difficult to write a poem in fifteen words onlt. It is more difficult to write, if the topic is so profound and so much a mystery- so much dependant on how you look at it. But I think you have really done a good job here.
Short and sweet. I like the style of the poem. It is really difficult to describe life. In fact I have a poem called "What is Life?" I never found the answer in the poem.
Great poem. Very well written.
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