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Life Is..

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A garden filled with dreams,
Hope blossoming slow..
Nurtured with gleams,
By mighty gardener above..

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  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    November 22, 2008

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    100th Hoodwink!

    And what a garden it is, full of beauty and richness, sadly not all eyes can see it as you do, how I wish they did. Short but so beautifully to the point. Best to you dear poetess.


  • peridotPixi
    February 29, 2008
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    cute

    good use of the promts, thanks for the comments, keep writing, -Amy

  • pvenugopal
    November 11, 2007
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    Refreshing poem. I see a butterfly flitting from flower to flower in this garden.


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    November 9, 2007

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    Yes this is just the way life is... and if it isn't it is ow it should be, you captured a lot in such a short piece, a great impact it had

    Karen


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    October 30, 2007

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    very inspirational piece,
    thanks so much for sharing.
    Best wishes to you friend.

    tory


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    October 30, 2007

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    Such beautiful and uplifting words. Thanks so very much for sharing... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.


  • LadyDementia gold member
    October 29, 2007
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    Beautiful

    Wonderful uplifting words. A superb write, very well penned indeed. Best of luck in the contest!


  • second-born
    October 29, 2007

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    oh my...I love your poem's beautiful images and the fact that you said that God is a "mighty gardener"...so captivating!!!


  • Candy6
    October 29, 2007
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    Beautiful

    Good write.


  • crimsondew
    October 29, 2007
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    Beautiful....love it!
    All the best!


  • Malabu
    October 29, 2007

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    yes yes
    and there be no more the perfect garden
    then God who gave us such beauty
    of flowers
    and children
    nurtured by his love

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