life,
a cloud
amongst it,
with trees
of blue
and purple -
watching us
float by
Author notes
the colors of yesterday and tomorrow
A contest entry
- Life is..... by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended October 30, 2007, 22 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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wonderful job here.' This was beautiful.
Great job on catching the HM in this contest;
Tory -
This is just beautifully penned. Takes ones breath away. Thanks so much for sharing... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.
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Oh this is my favorite poem of the day.... what a mind you have to think thus...how beautifuly penned.... wow wow wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! It is stunning.
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Different, in a great way. This poem made me feel light, as though I had not a care in the world...weird...lol. I really enjoyed it though, a unique take on the prompt. Best of luck in the contest!
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Such a feeling of weightlessness about this poem.. watching ourselves from above - actually from all sides! What a lovely metaphor for life this is. You amaze me each and every time! Wonderful.
~ Nicolette
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Wonderful dear...love the imagery..
All the best!
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Sensational piece again, my friend! I loved how beautiful this was...and how thoughtful, making me think of life and the pleasures of it. Good job. I wish you all the best.
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nice interpretation of life
well done!
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it is sadness loom
and the heart idles
the eyes await those tears...
I like what you speak
Mal
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