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Maria

Can I calm your heartbeat within your chest?
Comfort you when you have no rest?
See into your mind and stay inside your dreams?
Gasping for breath while inside I scream.

Understand that i know your every touch
Is living my broken dreams hurting you too much?
Can you fathom sleeping at my side?
Understand, real love never dies

Are you running now, outside that door
Leaving me forever more?
but don’t you see,
You hide yourself
From me

Now, I carry your memories deep inside my chest
Every thought now sings "I will never rest"
I wish to tell you my heart, but it’s torn in two
Your thoughts keep me separated from you

Please don’t take my sunshine away
Let it rain another day...

You held my broken frame and promised not to leave
Your words used to be warm enough to melt me,
Gave a reason to breathe
Painting up my pictures with the shattered,
Broken words i gave to you,
Revealed a secret you already knew

and it burned like fire, crackling in our hands
Yearning for centuries to a relationships end

Shattered, the hour glass pours out its soul
Staining our memories and eating us whole
Yet I yearn
For the past days
When entangled, wrapped in love we laid
Out of them all
Will you be
The one
Who stayed? 

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  • Ima survivor
    October 29, 2007

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    this is amazing

    nearly made me weep, so brilliant. I love the use of quotes to express something that would have fallen out of rhyme without them. This is amazing, keep writing, your great


    • living-dust
      November 6, 2007
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      Thank you so much! it means a lot that it could mean this much to someone else.


  • Damique
    October 29, 2007
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    o. this is so deep...i was bout 2 shead a few tears cause it reminds me of my relationship...