Soul inhaling sunrise
even in storms,
clarity caressing precious seconds
with love's fiery fingers.
Author notes
prompt - life is
A contest entry
- Life is..... by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended October 30, 2007, 22 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Congratulations on winning gold.
"Soul inhaling sunrise/even in storms." Nice positive imagery -
Congrats on the gold!
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simply beautiful, and so very true. a very desrving gold winner
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Beautifully expressed in so few words you have said it all. Thanks so much for sharing... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.
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This is so delicious, hitting just the right spot
Good luck in the contest
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Love the images and the contrast--fits great with prompt of "life is." Good luck in the contest!
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wow granpa this is really good!
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oh my...such is hairraising light even in our storms.... that strike is always always an invitation to beware....
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An inspiring take on the prompt, very well thought out and worded. Best of luck in the contest!
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An inspiring take on the prompt, very well thought out and worded. Best of luck in the contest!
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Ahhh, you have penned beautiful words for the prompt given. I thought about this one myself and couldn't think of anything creative or with depth of meaning that I could cram into just 15 words.
But you, you have done a masterful job. Thank you for sharing your words with me and best wishes to you in the contest. Keep that quill dipped in ink and ever ready for use.
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Wonderful
what you have done in 15 words....
All the best!
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Wow. A beautiful piece. The words you used gave me so much imagery that I feel so full, but...isn't that the joy of life? Feeling full? Good job. I wish you all the best.
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Excellent write! excellent take on the prompt thank you for sharing. ~Blessings always~
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