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DestroyeD

I was popular, I was loved
Everybody knew my name
I had friends, I laughed
I played, I danced, I sang
I was not afraid of who I was

He Destroyed Me

I lived in fear, my friends abandoned me
In all fairness to them they didn't understand
He wanted to kidnap me, take me away
.And He Succeeded.
No-one helped me, No-one saved me
I begged him to let me go
He cried and screamed and yelled
Breaking himself while breaking me

I was trapped afterwards
I couldn't go anywhere by myself
Couldn't leave class, couldn't walk home
And everybody knew
They caged me

Everybody knew my name, my life and my problems
And I hated every second of it
Fear Can Destroy You
Whilst being destroyed, I changed
I went to a new school and became invisible
No-one knew my name...
Or my problems
And I was very alone

Depression took over me
Destroying everything I had left in me
I was an empty shell
I wanted nothing more than to die

WHY DIDN'T ANYONE NOTICE?????
why didn't they help me???
why didn't they talk to me?

They let me deal with everything on my own
And I was so young
I couldn't deal
It was just too much

5 Years Later...

I am still invisible
I am quiet
I am So lost, So scared, So alone
No-one ever helped me
Never tried to, Never wanted to
They just sat back and watched
As my life fell to pieces
As I fell to pieces


"and I lived happily every after"

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  • Rodrigo Garibay
    January 4

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    OMG I CAN REALLY RELATE TO THIS!!!! I FELT LIKE THIS A LOT, BUT THEN AGAIN PPL STILL LOVE ME..BUT ITS SAD WHEN FRIENDS ARE IN BOTH SIDES...AND THEY DONT KNOW WHO TO BELEIVE
    =(...ANYWAYS ITS SO SAD...BUT IT WAS NICE=)..LOVIINN IT=D

  • Vania
    October 31, 2007

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    very good write... i loved the last line, it made me think. a sad poem, but one i can understand.
    good write!!!


  • Walking Tall
    October 29, 2007
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    very different
    very sad
    interesting
    good write
    seej