She,
the very apple from God's own Tree of Life,
gives decadent succulence to man's forbidden thirst!
She infiltrates, in Trojan fashion,
the fortressed minds of men.
A shape(ly)-shifter,
she plagiarizes every wanton image
imprisoned in dungeons of denial.
Raw lust, inspired like a spell
recited from eloquent hips,
renders her a creature to be craved,
had,
and imprinted, for she will not be kept!
She tempts, lures, and delivers!
Then, seizing her scepter,
she raises my still-pounding heart in her hand,
and annoints me in my own blood.
In her other hand she holds
the title to my soul,
bearing my signature in the ink we made together.
On bended knee,
I follow her into the depths of Hell,
for she alone can quench my need;
and I am eternally grateful!
A contest entry
- catch me in the DARKness if you can by theDARK1.
337 points, ended November 26, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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very nice choice of words, makes the image & notions highly vivid.
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What a piece of poetry, It reads like a romantic offering from an old master. --- Thank you (and wow).
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WOW!!!!
This is brilliant!!!!!
Great write from beginning to end, you captured the image(s) wonderfully and brought the image to life.
I love the entire poem
" She infiltrates, in Trojan fashion,
the fortressed minds of men.
A shape(ly)-shifter,
she plagiarizes every wanton image
imprisoned in dungeons of denial...
In her other hand she holds
the title to my soul,
bearing my signature in the ink we made together.
On bended knee,
I follow her into the depths of Hell,
for she alone can quench my need;
and I am eternally grateful!
AWESOME...WELL PENNED!
A shinny trophy awaits you in this great write!
You do not need this, but I wish you the very best in the contest. I will have to read more of your writes. You have amazing talent
Take care,
Many blessings,
David
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whew, totally masterful at your descriptive strokes of genious. i see already this will be another hard contest to judge. i thank you for the quality of this one, DARK.
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