Instructions: 'throw down on the bed';
Hmmmmm, she thought with a smile.
I'd like to throw your body down
ease slow and gentle round to just about
the time I get you where I want to be
and then make it clear just why we came
or didn't yet. I'd like to lay real close
to you do all the things you like me to,
feel the softness of your touch, say not much
at all she thought then smiled and thought again.
I'd like to trace your lip just so and lightly
brush your mustache with my fingertip and then
dare to between your teeth intrude
exploring just because it seems like
such a lovely thing to do
then snuggle closer in to you.
Perhaps I'd lick your cheek or neck
breathe in the scent of your cologne,
or close my eyes and just inhale
your essence and ascend then on beyond
the physical restrictions of our bodies
and our minds. I'd take your spirit's hand in mine
and show you how to fly beyond
the cares of earth and time
and for those moments
you'd be mine,
if I could throw you down...on the bed...just once.
A contest entry
- SWEET SEDUCTIONS I COLLABERATION WITH BLUE REW by Swan song.
650 points, ended November 10, 2007, 3 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Comments
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Yes just throw them down and take advantage of them LOL I liked this very much well done poet
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your comment in the directions gave me the idea...thanks
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Ohhhh, this is seduction, pure and simple. Mesmerizing verse, I was completely captivated within.
I especially enjoyed the last stanza and the repetition that is the ending line. Blue
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Thanks for the comments and the Silver....
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