Waiting for a connection.
getting frustrated because it takes so long.
Why won't my internet show affection?
What in the world did I do so wrong?
Taking forever to download this song.
Not able to check my myspace.
What on earth am I to do?
Oh, no a bunch of files erase!
Wait! Your's doesn't do this too?
Can I change computers with you?
Author notes
If it's not what you want DQ it!
Awesome picture!
leslielovesthomas
A contest entry
- Funny Pic Inspiration by Recluse Writer.
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I just expiernced this last night. I hate my computer. Great work, thanks for entering.
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I just checked our your page and see your pretty new here, so welcome to Allpoetry, I hope you have as good a time as I do
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Haha I checked out the other contest to see the pic inspiration and it's great, along with this poem. My old computer was awfully slow so I can relate to it. You have written this wonderfully. It flows really well and the rhyme is good. I hope you don't end up like the person in the picture!
Thanks for entering and good luck
Take care x
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I saw the image for this contest earlier and thought it was a riot. I think you have hit the nail on the head with this one! I think he needs to find himself a faster hook-up or dump that door stop and buy a REAL computer.
Thank you for sharing your words with me and best wishes to you. Keep that quill dipped in ink and ever ready for use. 
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lol.....i thought my computer was the only one that had a mind of its own. nicely done lil sister...for real.
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lol.
cute. i know the feeling.
im going to blow up my computer. you will see the blast from there. ^^ -
Pleased you like the pic and many thanks for your entry. No way are you getting my computer as it is going to the grave with me.
I do not DQ unless rules are broken or requests are not adhered to as this is your own poetic take on the pic...(so where is your name in the author notes
quick! quick! )
Linda
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Nicely done. I looked at that picture and came up blank. You took it and ran with it. Good flow and meter. Perfect for the picture, oh and by the way my computer does all that to me and more. lol
Well done.
Best to you in the contest.
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