Racing along the highway,
In the dead of night,
Heart racing,
Adrenaline pumping,
Nothing can stop me now.
The car goes faster and faster,
I hear the joyous screams in the back,
Nothing can stop us now.
We race through the intersection,
Narrowly miss the tow truck,
But still we go on,
Nothing can stop us now.
Racing into the tunnel,
Meet the corner in the road,
But I was too slow,
And something stopped us.
A contest entry
- Round 2 of 5 - Speedy Round - 30 will advance - Invite ONLY by Florida Sunshine.
525 points, ended October 31, 2007, 24 entries
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Comments
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Very nice! I loved this. It really drew the reader in. and it made a good point. My brother lost two friends in a situation like this. Good write.
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all good things must come to an end
good luck in going the rest of the way =)
seej
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All so true searchin'~ Terrific job with the write~ with the twist at the end...
Congrats on making it to the 2nd round ~ good luck to you!
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