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To be so blue

A                           
drunk man                   
called me:                 
to complain and                             
whine-- a waste of time                                                     
(toss my hair, roll my eyes)                             
I can't face people, when they                                               
ask, "have you had enough yet? No?" 
Even though I'm done, can't whisper, "When!"

mocking me, for all I can't stand
Outside, the wind is teasing trees
"these are..." (defeat) I'm a wreck--
these are motions- repeat
bricked you in (out?). Breathe--
Blank walled, I
sit right, here:]
doesn't
[It

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I decided to write one poem, and then write another in between. I think I don't like this idea.

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