I touch your skin
And feel you start to tremble
As I see all of the things
Our love does resemble.
As I press my lips upon yours
I feel your heart beating faster
As the temperature rises
We see there is no more disguises.
I begin to caress you so gently
Knowing that it's of
Nothing less than sweet delicacy
For each touch is oh so Heavenly.
As our clothing slowly hits the floor
I wrap you up in my arms so tight
Knowing that now is the moment
That everything seems just so right.
I begin to blow softly in your ear
As all of your worries and doubt
Begin to just disappear
We lay intertwined holding eachother near.
As I brush my hand
Softly down your side
I feel your body start to shake
Knowing now that it is love we plan to make.
As I feel you place your hand on my shoulder and grasp
All of the emotions
That are pounding within
Knowing that this is where true love did begin.
We feel the world stop turning
Because for the very first time
It is nothing less than love
That we know we're feeling.
You place your head upon my chest
As our hearts start to slow
As we close our eyes to rest
We see that we've excelled in love's test.
Author notes
User Name: PureRomance
In a list
A contest entry
- Calling My Erotic, Sensual, Romantic Writers of ALL times on AP by Ephiphany.
500 points, ended November 5, 2007, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - !!!!*Making Love Intensely*!!!! by ForeverLastingComa.
490 points, ended February 22, 55 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Your BEST sensual/love poems by perfectsunset.
800 points, ended March 19, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Light my fire (under 18 stay out) by Loving my life.
400 points, ended November 22, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, • Add to finalists list, or remove from contest
What did you think
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Aww this was deeply romantic
and a beautiful love poem.
Thanks for sharing & best of luck -
is it hot in here or just me? very nicely done babe...
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wow
wow!! truly this is an amzin write!
the wrd flow was good...and full of emotions.
i cud actually sense it!!
gr8 job!!
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Sounds good. I like the bit: each touch to be Heavenly. All the worries and doubt disappear!!!
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very nice. Good write.
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Wow. I really like this. The passion in this write is soothing as some people act like they don't have time to 'make love' and just 'have sex' all the time. They are really missing out. lol
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Agreed... Nicely Done! it gave me a very nice little warm feeling inside. Which yes sounds super cheesy, but so true. Well Done!
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Nicely done! Romantic with such a sweet innocence to it. I really enjoyed this!
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Very nice. I love how you're 'making love' and not just simple sex. You're right, this was a great poem. I loved the rhyme scheme and just the message itself. Ahh..haha, great job.
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*smiles happily* This is so lovely sweetheart. I liked it, espeially cause I know it'll be us in time *hugs and kisses* I love you.
~~MrsPureRomance~~ -
very good sensual write. congrats on the HM very good read. thanks for sharing this
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sensual and sexy
congrats on the hm
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wow, again this is absolutely amazing!
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this was nice poem, have a few dream like that myself
congrats on the trophy
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very sensual poem. And romantic. Very vivid imagery. Thank you for sharing and best to you in the contest
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LOVING
Beautiful piece ...the ending wrap it up quite well and such pure emotions was greatly expressed ...thanks for entering!
Love, Raneika
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very beautiful. Good luck.
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i really like this!
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This very sensual has a nice flow...thank you and Good Luck in the contest.
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wow..
this is very good
well done hunni -
wow!!
that was absolutely amazing, and it has such vivid imagery that just blows you away. my favourite is I begin to blow softly in your ear
As all of your worries and doubt
Begin to just disappear
We lay intertwined holding eachother near.
i can imagine myself in that situtaoin
keep up th good work
Dream-catcher
x
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WOW!
That just blew me away! Well written! You did an excellent job with the description of what love feels like. Keep that ink flowing.
~Donna~
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awwwwwwww how very very sweet!!!! I love the way you depict the emotions here. This is very touching. I think my favorite part is the last stanza. For some reason I almost always prefer the last lines or stanzas
Thank you for sharing poet! 
Peace and Love
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Very moving
This is great,Glad you shared it with me....But why did you ask my opinion?
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How sweet ^_^
I begin to blow softly in your ear
As all of your worries and doubt
Begin to just disappear
We lay intertwined holding eachother near.
Love that.
~ Kerri -
very well written well done
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Wonderful
This one really captures the feelings of that perfect moment...It's a rare thing....two thumbs up -
I like your poem, it brings back the romance once again. It deliver true feelings, true emotions that caress my senses once again. I hope that people at first to make this thinks the same way. More power to you. Im a new member in this site and I hope that you will look for my poems too, thanks.
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this was so well written. well done xx
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