At the top of your voice,
Let all, hear you rejoice.
Do not hold it inside,
For you have nothing to hide.
So do not fear,
And do not shed a tear.
It is time,
Time for rhyme.
Unorganized as it may be,
Let it be open and free.
If you do not try,
You have no right to ask why.
These words of advice,
May not be precise.
So listen if you want to,
As long as you are you.
Corey David Shipton
Copyright ©2007 Corey David Shipton
Author notes
To all who write or want to write...
This is option #2
A contest entry
- HAPPY CONTEST. My first contest only 1 rule! must rhyme. by K1r5ty.
900 points, ended December 29, 2007, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
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So listen if you want to,
As long as you are you
This was my favorite part of the entire poem. Amazing work.
Warmest,
Mylee -
thank you for entering my contest very clever i must say i did want a poem that rhymed!! thinking outside the box i like!!!! very well done!! x
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such a LOL piece of work!!
My favourite bit :
"It is time,
Time for Rhyme"
Don't ask why that was my favourite, it just was!!
I liked this piece, it is very up beat, and chirpy and happy, and funny and numerous other things that i can't be bothered writing down because it'd take forever!! It made me smile so its an automatically an awesome piece in my books!!
Claire xx
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A beautiful and wonderfully written piece of poetic majic. I really enjoyed this piece. ...There is one error I found. If in your 7th stanza the word "advise" is pronounced "ad-viz" I think you want "advice" pronounced "AD-vis" which is the rhyme for precise. I think you let the pspelling of the precise mix you up.
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this was quite an awesome little ditty.. what an excellent concept.....writing a rhyming poem about rhyming!! I like it it kind of corky!!!!
any who great write!!
Keep the pen flowing!!
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