Coming into my fears looking for hope,
A death of a loved one we all try to cope,
Praying for strength and bravery through it all,
Hoping we don't fail and eventually fall,
Loosing the strength to handle this hurt and pain,
Holding on by the string attached to us we stain,
As the tears flow down our cheeks into the pool below,
We miss the chances we never got to be bright and glow,
We fade away into another day crying to make it through,
We are fading cause we can't possibly live without you,
The way you used to comfort us in the middle of the night,
Took us to another place where we would never feel any frieght,
Craddle our hearts forever more never forget us in the end,
We will be thinking of you and we will miss you always friend,
We will remember the long days with the sun so bright and hot,
All the little things we will reminise and never the things we forgot,
The little pleasures of our hearts warming up to you,
Those are the things that will get us through,
You may be gone but you still live here in our heart,
And as long as you are there we will never be apart.
A contest entry
- Take the pain away... by Little Miss Mental.
360 points, ended July 15, 2008, 23 entries
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This is exactly what I needed to hear. It helps me when things are written down...I dunno why, but thanks for entering my contest, the best of luck to you and I, not let's just hope I don't go and cry...jk



