Pinning me down,
And holding me back
I’m forced to despise
This wretched attack
This solid steel cage
Invisible to you
Is keeping me here
It won’t let me through
The claws of this world
So falsely perfect
Are nothing but lies
And are leaving me wrecked
So help me please!
Help me escape!
I don’t care if I die,
But I must leave this place!
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Well soon I will be up there and you can come visit me when ever you want and I'll take you out around the city. It may not be a complete way out, but it will help.
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Great meter ...
I had to read it twice to realize it wasn't a rhyme. On the content, I understand you. No matter, I think this trapped feeling is the human condition. It never leaves. Good job. Warm regards, Sultan -
It's tough ...
To be in between lives ... under our parent's authority while feeling the 'call of life'. I wouldn't want to go through it again. You express the tension wonderfully. Warm regards, Sultan
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