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That's all you are to me

Single handedly, you've destroyed two hearts;
torn two souls who were golden and pure.
Your ignorance and closemindedness
simply tore us apart and broke us completely.

I hope you're happy.

Shadows gloom overhead and reign down on me,
like minions bearing full burdens down upon a shattered soul
as the window pane of my essence beams in replica
of the euphoria we had that you now demolished.

Is that what you wanted?

Cobwebs line broken corridors of my being
as dying roses shed sweet crimson upon this mannequin corpse
and icicles run through my veins at the simple sound of your name...
traitor...liar...thief....bitch...

That's all you are to me.

Author notes

Grah. Giselle's mother pisses me off.

Random venting.

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  • Yumi
    October 29, 2007

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    This is an amazing write. I can feel your anger and I can also relate to it. It's not the funnest thing to feel, but it does make for great poems. Keep up the great work.

    Erica ^.^


  • Dancing Feather gold member
    October 28, 2007

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    Great write Kris..I can feel the anger and hurt in it. I liked it. Keep up the great write. Don't let Giselle's mom get to you. She's just a dickface wanna be whore. She doesn't know you like she thinks she does.

    Great write.


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