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Midnight in a Jar

If I could
I'd catch all the fireflies
Just for you
Put them in a jar
Placed on a shelf in your room

You would stare at them and wonder
Why did you put these bugs in my room?

But for reasons unknown
You would leave them there anyway
They would sit there for you
And give you a light show
Every night

I caught you your own midnight
Full of twinkling stars.

yup yup

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  • Paradise Prisoner
    October 29, 2007

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    hehe i really like this. i loved the line "Why did you put these bugs in my room?" hehe...tis true.


  • Loves Darkest Ages
    October 29, 2007
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    Beautiful!!

    Very pretty my dear. I love the whole idea behind it. It's very adorable.. I love it!!

    <3 Sarah-