Cold lips tell of a broken heart
Missing parts of a person unknown
To see but black and drips of red
Come slowly sinking into my world of dread
Come hold my hand, ill drag you down
Come sing my song with cold piercing notes
See naught but the fiery depths of hell
Go hide, Go back to inside your shell
Se see me now in my chemo chair
A death sentence written in bright red blood
The difference between stubbornness and pride small
Hear now the sweetness of the angels call
Author notes
my mate was inspired to write this from these 3 lines that i wrote:
Missing pieces of a broken heart
a missing part of a person unknown
a story untold from cold lips
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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OMG
GREAT GREAT GREAT BUT VERYY SAD!!!!
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wonderful write!
and i loved the 3 lines you've written.. maybe if u finish them into a poem it would be a kind of a reply to this one or sthg..
anw lol great piece
~rana~
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As I read this I thought what a good poem you have written!
I really like the second stanza and the line with the song with cold piercing notes... and the line with fiery depths of hell. 
Really a poem to notice and enjoy and I am proud of your writing, 'lil Aussie Sis! 
Melodies
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