I will always be there
maybe not to hold or kiss
I will always be there
in a smile of bliss
I am always there
for if you love me
I am always there
in your heart I be
I will always love you
no matter what I do
I will always love you
cause you are you
I will always need you
you are in my heart
I will always need you
from the very start
I am there when you need to walk
I am there when you need to talk
I am there to turn your frown
I am there when your down
Corey David Shipton
Copyright ©2007 Corey David Shipton
Author notes
This is for option six... Beloved
A contest entry
- 6 OPTIONS...I HOPE YOU WILL LOVE IT, PREWRITES ARE ALLOWED by Romily.
380 points, ended November 27, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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made me feel way better i love this! -
you wrote from your heart, I can feel but ops..a mere mistake...hurry up ! fix it up..."I am always there
in your heart I be" these lines are a bit confusing, and it would be "I am there when you're/ you are down"
very very good try. I loved to read it. -
Awwwww that is so sweet!!! what total rubbish you can't write romantically!!!
Loved this so so so so much!!!
Write more lol
Claire xx
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