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Hypocrisy

You changed your face again;
this time I hardly recognize you.
What gets me is
your face was so lovely,
and this one's so ugly.
What happened to the you I used to know?

Please tell me what you think

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    February 27

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    Ah..you have revealed the stories of the world..and the truth of the life as well..love the intensity and the hard tone of the meaning behind..well done..

  • hose30
    November 1, 2007

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    Interesting and thought provoking.I like the lines.Your face was so lovely, and this one's so ugly. What happened to the you I used to know? Interesting question.People can change.Sometimes people are capable of things that you thought they would never do.It lead you the question. What happened to the you I used to know.Or was it all an illusion, the person that i thought you were.Great write and it makes me thinks alot.