Magenta moods (lost dark horizons of the soul)
savored, salivated, light to dark – yet, some
favored modality chronicled by love’s rainbow arc
as tested and true humor touches more than a few
Excision, precision, metered, braved, by taskmasters
certainly the bold and brave will not therein cave
laced, embraced, by metaphor’s and imageries stance
always from the soul as truth, wisdoms, vibrate, dance
adjectives, verbs, nouns, resound as trestle tracks
pound, hound, well chosen - expedite their marks
endless the waltz in words; forgiven expletives
surely to wear, tear, as fallen butterflies’ wings
So you see many are the sides as ocean’s tides
poetic isms to me whether it be; sonnets’ or odes'
plainly for me excision of soul the ultimate destiny ~
A contest entry
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600 points, ended October 29, 2007, 12 entries
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1225 points, ended December 4, 2007, 21 entries
Honorable mention
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Bravo!!!!!!! Excelent, and very well written! This peice is absolutly amazing and very thought provoking. What a wonderful expersion of ones self, and thoughts. You have shown here how writeing is a profound part of your life as well how your thought process seems to work and flow throught your everyday life. My favorite part by far was this passage:
"So you see many are the sides as ocean’s tides
poetic isms to me whether it be; sonnets’ or odes'
plainly for me excision of soul the ultimate destiny ~"
Again very well done!! Great write and good luck in the contest!
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Thank you!
Your comments are so helpful and I have pressed the star to give you more points and for some reason it won't work... truly, I appreciate your comments as when I see what others can relate to then I know when I write to embelish, embroider in the directions that I have touched someone
I have been gone from AP for a year I had been quite ill with a multitude of stomach problems... and I am so grateful to be able to come back... yet, I am learning what I forgot and I keep pressing the wrong buttons sigh... so please forgive me
Wishing you much success in all of your endeavors
~Myst~
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I can tell you've been writing for a while, this is poetry deep. This part right there is simply magnificent. surely to wear, tear, as fallen butterflies’ wings. I wish you the best of luck. Keep up the great work and thank you for sharing
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Thank you!
Thank you Mr. Mack for taking the time to stop by and to share your insightful comments... I'm delighted you found the work palatable
Thank you again for your warm welcome comments
Wishing you much success in all of your endeavors
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oh soulfully done.... I lvoe your word usages and it speaks clearly to me.... nicely done.
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Thank you!
Hello dear heart thank you for taking the time to stop by and share your warm comments
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All I can say is wow
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Thank you Mojo Warrior for stopping by and taking the time to share your thoughts... I'm delighted you enjoyed your visit
Wishing you much success in all of your endeavors
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