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~* Stars Before Steps *~

 

 

 

 

 

 

It rained stars before steps, I stood in awe
and wondered if a woman can walk
on the moon if shaped with right angles
when wrong has been done.

Would foot of another offer to help
or suppress the Soul
in limbo through life or maybe
just maybe the other would walk
and keep company.

Is that a possibility or plea before eyes
that can look down on Dreams,
though not written in stone, yet I stood
in awe at the mere thought.

I became brave, opened books
as songbird flew, it sung for me.

Recalled how another achieved success
through Faith, felt it touch her cocoa skin.
Did not complain of the cold nor warmth
but embraced the feeling of alive.

She could hear the moans, the growls
from city streets and country roads.

It did not cease her from following
the feathers left behind by songbird
until the last feather fell
before her battered feet cried out.

They shed highlights of hell and back.
They choked on childhood visions,
adult atrocities still active in present time.

Children who sleep, wake and live in hunger
also those abused by sworn protectors, pretenders.
Mistreated elderly, mishandled by own kin
also by tainted shells who lost their loving touch.

She could hear sobs, songs in tears
from the fallen that could not hang on, they let go
after fingers grew tired of being tired.

Her inner voice captured the croons,
began to write about their world
and share the heroism with our world;
refused to separate skin by color.

Voice willingly worked to reunite the gaps,
invited battered Souls to break bread
with humility at her dinner table;
made sure they left with love of self
[ feathered Gift ]
spoken from within her Spirit.


  


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  • Yvette Champ gold member
    October 31, 2007

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    A wonderfully,warm and understanding accolade to MA,my favourite part was the last stanza,congratulations on the Gold.


  • mysticstorm gold member
    October 29, 2007

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    This is perfectly beautiful and so well done in her honor. You did it with the style and flair that is her and wrote of her life as well.
    Excellent work!
    She would be honored for I meet her once and she is just as amzing in person.
    Congratulations on a well deserved Gold!

    Love,
    mystic


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    October 29, 2007

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    Oh my goodness! She is all that and so much more. This embodies her life, compassion, heart, and soul. Beautifully written. A beautiful tribute to a magnificent woman. Well done. Thank you for entering and good luck.

    Jeannie


  • StarEyes
    October 28, 2007

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    Oh my dear friend,

    What a beautiful read this one is!! I love it!! You have given life to these words as you honor this dear poet! Fantastic!!

    Best of luck in this contest!!

    and love

    Nettie


  • HaleyMary
    October 28, 2007

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    Beautiful write. This makes me think of how even just one person can make a difference in the world, no matter who they are. This was a very inspirational piece. thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest.


  • Bedroom Eyes
    October 28, 2007

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    I've not had the pleasure of reading this woman's work, but you've penned a piece of great depth to honor her

    Wishing you all the best in this contest!!!!



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