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Twisted highway

Come here my child
Suckle from my breast of sin and desire
Let my essence become yours, putrid and vile
You shall need no other, I am all that you now have
Once your life was yours to do with as you thought fit
"Do as thou wilt shall be the whole of the Law"
You sought me, caught me, now you are naught but for me

You reminence still of the time we first kissed
You inhaled, kept me held, and now for all but that rush you will remain in Hell
You courted me, you should have known but turned a blind eye and snorted me
And as my dark seed took root, your mind became mine
Which in my hands mouldered as your soul once warm grew colder
Yet you smile still, for you know in the least, I will be here

Fleeting in shadow with your imaginative foe still on your trail
Your heart beats, blood rushing through the twisting highway of your veins
Eyes dilated in a inhuman glare, Jaw clinched tight grinding your teeth once again
The desire of sleep ensues, yet your too filled with the insatiable need
Come here my child
Suckle from my breast of sin and desire

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  • Florida Sunshine
    October 28, 2007

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    Icono~ Wow~ this is just wicked~ (I mean it in a good way) .... heartpounding... wow... Nice job~ What a twist on the prompt~ quite different~

    Congrats on making it to Round 2 ~ good luck to you!