What did I do
In those spaces
Between places
When I was with you
What did I do?
What can I do
Now I find
That I am blind
To all but you
What can I do?
What will I do?
With just a photograph
To hold that world apart
Now I'm alone
Not even hopes of you
That can't come true
What can I do?
Author notes
Inspired by the song:
http://www.smickandsmodoo.com/lyrics/what.htm
And video worth watching:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jeUXq-lHxE8
Please tell me what you think
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This is a very beautiful and sweet poem. It is a very amazing write, that declares the feeling of losing someone and wondering how to cope in life without them. You did a very amazing job in writing this. God bless you in all that you do and keep on penning wonderful poems like thes. You truly have a great gift for poetry.
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Thank you morely! I am very glad you enjoy reading them! I hope to find more time to write them, though Uni life gets in the way a lot.
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i like this one heaps and know where you are coming from ... ive had the same experiences
all in all i great write keep up the good work
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Yes! It was about that same person. Thank yooooou!!!
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awwww i wish this poem is for me
hehehe i think i know how you're feeling...that the dream of you as well Christian coming to visit me could not come true..it's kinda sad because I would like someone like you to come and we could share and make good memories together....anyway, this poem is sweet, it's sad, it gives loving feeling too...keep writing my bestfriend...you have a gift!
What can I do
Now I find
That I am blind
To all but you
What can I do?
this part is full of sugar!
I can almost taste how sweet it is!
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Thank you!
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very nice mofie....definitely inspired and i like the simplicity as well. nice job.
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Thank youuuu!!
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