This road home

This road I'm on

Is paved with

Good intentions

It's a long road home

And I'm just getting started
Where I belong is in question
Going to a home i'm not sure I belong to

This road I walk
Is the path
That I follow
Until my heart finds
Its true love

There's only one road
There's only one path
Into the distance
I follow my way home

A contest entry

Round 2 of 5 - Speedy Round - 30 will advance - Invite ONLY by Florida Sunshine. 525 points, ended October 31, 2007, 24 entries
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Blooming Poet
January 21, 2008

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This is beautiful. Its so powerful. I'm glad you can see the path you walk is full of good intentions at least. This is well penned and beautiful.
Samantha-.
October 29, 2007

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wow. this is so powerful. i love it. it has so much meaning to me. i have felt this way sooo many times. i lovelovelove it.
Florida Sunshine
October 28, 2007

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My you did a very good job~ I think all of us in one form or another is just trying to get home. ~ I did enjoy your write!

Congrats on making it to round 2 ~ good luck to you