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remember {same place, another time}

laughing
i drank in the smoke
of an eve of euphoria
accompanied by the swollen moon
smiling
i thought other things
remembering another night
sweat, skin, and coasters; differently
shiv'ring
in haunted breezes
giggles and similarities
accompanied by the swollen moon

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  • Sir Ima Cucumber
    October 28, 2007

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    I'd think the moon would make us reflective and given to nostalgia. You write beautifully of this, reminding me of some memories of my own.