I just so love it how you never procrastinate
So right on the money, you've never been late
in the moment, is how it should always be done
right on the cutting edge, is when it's fun
You enlighten with your status quo and more
just how you roll it and I'm proud to say so
from your position you can take on the lead
you've got the knack for it, yes you do, indeed
Some completely miss the moments' prevalent cue
they get frazzled with delay, now they're overdue
it's a choice they make when it matters the most
do it now, do it right, then you stand and toast!
A contest entry
- Round 2 of 5 - Speedy Round - 30 will advance - Invite ONLY by Florida Sunshine.
525 points, ended October 31, 2007, 24 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this was for me really stunted and never really had anything about it... and the rhyming just didnt fit, really rhyme should only exist when its more natural than the thought itself.
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2lulla ~ terrific job! I really like the whole rhythm of the piece... it zips right along...
Congrats on making it to round 2~ good luck to you! -
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Wow, this is indeed a distinct honor and I so appreciate.
Thanks so much for the Silver and for the contest itself
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Yes I especially liked the last stanza
Do it now, do it right, then you stand and toast
That was a good line
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Thanks, this was a challenge, the prompt was "promptitude"
hahaha
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