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Two My Angels

I sitting here in my room, thinking of my friend,
Two of them are gone & this pain will never end,

I look up at the pictures & sometimes I want to die,
And as I began to look to the future all I do is cry,

You two won't be there for grauation or to be with me...
Both of your lives were taken, taken from two seperate trees,

Anniveraries, Birthdays & Holidays another reminder of this pain,
Never will I forget you two... your lives will never be in vain,

As I sit here, I listen to the rain, It reminds me of my tears,
Of all the joy you two brought me all through those happy years,

People are so insentitive of telling me to move on,
Can't they see my soul, my heart, the part of me thats gone?

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About Megan & Vicki
Written October 14th, 2003

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  • insanerush
    September 4, 2004
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    Good

    Wow...I really liked this poem. You brought out great emotion. Thanks for the comment and your generousity. I am always here if you need me. Take Care.


  • Chanting Whisper
    October 14, 2003
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    I can realy relate i mean when mike died my life fell apart,it is not the same without him.It takes time to move on.I haven't moved on yet.


  • Bluestar
    October 14, 2003
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    You can only move on when you are ready, dont feel the need to rush it along, if you do, then the pain will hurt a lot more when you remember them. You take all the time in the world, you've got a lot of people that love you and care for you, and will do what ever they can to help you.
    I'm sure Megan and Vicki are so very proud of you
    Much love
    ~*blue*~
    xxx xxx


  • October 14, 2003
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    As painful as the holidays are now, one day those same holidays will be a time to remember your loved ones fondly. Everyone takes their own time to heal, you take whatever time you need to get there. You wil "move on" when you are ready. I really loved this piece. I could feel the love you have for your friends in this.

    Much love to ya!!
    ~~Mary Anne~~


  • October 14, 2003
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    It'll be time to move on when and if YOU decide it's time. I feel for your sense of loss and pain and hope that one day you'll be truly happy. It'll happen, maybe soon or maybe not for awhile. In the meantime keep writing as you are gifted and your expressions of grief touch all those that read them.

    Be at peace soon
    Event


  • April Renee
    October 14, 2003
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    so very sad
    mourning can linger on
    take as much time as you need
    for it is only u feels ur pain
    and sees what is on ur mind
    nicely penned....

    ~*~Blu~*~

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