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The Greatest Gift Of All

Her dainty little head,
Resting upon Mommys gentle lap.
Her soft and delicate hands,
Are swung around her body like a wrap.

Her precious tiny feet,
Are swaying freely like the wind.
Her flamingo pink lips,
Are kissing Mommys cheek with a smug grin.

Her contagious half smile,
Sends joy to Mommys face.
The way her crystal blue eyes tells a story,
Creates pure happiness and grace.

Her waist so small,
And her laugh, so breathtaking.
Her frustration, so mellow,
And her tears, so heartbreaking.

What more could you ask for?
Nothing..It's the perfect gift for you!
A swadled, and cuddly bundle of joy,
Goodnight, sweet dreams my baby boo.

Author notes

This is a very cute and loving poem about a newborn baby and her mother. I wrote this for a picture and contest inspiration.
http://earthmommies.com/library/CBR002218.jpg

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  • perfectsunset gold member
    May 13, 2008

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    Hey froglegs, nice poem you have penned here... aww sooo cute! like furry little froggy stuffed animals with fuzzy peaches! oOooo

    Mooooo, oink oink hehe. That kind of cute. Anyways this a beautiful poem & a treasure to read.
    Never feed your baby rum, cause then they'll end up like Jack Sparrow asking "but why is the rum gone?" for the rest of their life! lol.

    Thanks for entering & best of luck


  • Molassis
    November 11, 2007
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    A very sweet piece which, I'm sure, Autumn's mother will appreciate and love!

    The sweetness in this poem, the love and emotion enclosed within your words make this an absolutely wonderful entry to the contest.

    My sincere thanks for writing and entering my contest!

    ~Melissa